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I have been listening to the template track for a long time,
and instead of going nuts, I figured it would be a nice way to spend valentines day to write this song.
I'd appreciate comments on the lyrics, I'm aware of the limited singing skills (liked the last chorus, tho) ;)
this one's for H.
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June 03 2016 23:19:32
FrankMilFrankMil Deep emotion
March 30 2015 12:54:32
BluesbuddaBluesbudda you are cool :-)
March 02 2015 23:12:53
mandoloddamandolodda like very much, all thumbs I have for this
February 22 2015 21:13:51
OliVBeeOliVBee very nice band all together smile.gif ... i like those lyrics and the way they're presented, the breathing is good and the flow very pleasant ! well done \o/
February 17 2015 11:06:03
kimbokimbo Da mm..... I need to give more thumbs......great lyrics to a great tune....means so much more when real emotions are involved.
Goin on my playlist right now. well done all.... Specially you dick.

February 15 2015 16:58:27
AnneCozeanAnneCozean neat melody and phrasing.
"been down a long road" - lovely change
"to a song you'll most likely never hear" - well those words and that melody made my heart twinge. your lyrics could be sung in a totally mawkish self pitying manner, but they are absolutely not. vocal melody keeps it uplifted but not without questions. i think it's a beautiful marriage of magical music, profoundly personal and vulnerable lyrics, and a vocal delivery that makes it work. that last repeated verse really brings it to an effective close. glad i caught this one, Gentlemen. it's SOLID!

+2 February 15 2015 23:20:17 AnneCozeanMrSnuts
thank you so much for your review, Anne! I'm a bit speechless tbh smile.gif it's just right you mention the beauty of the music once more - these guys did a fantastic job
February 16 2015 01:54:48 AnneCozeanAnneCozean
my pleasure, Sir Snuts.
February 15 2015 11:51:59
UloisiusUloisius Mir gefällts sehr gut ;o)
February 15 2015 11:29:26
haddockhaddock Hey, I like this a lot! smile.gif
February 15 2015 10:11:07
ShiShi lovely backing track from Marceys, Baer and Mr H and very heartfelt lyrics and vocals from Mr Snuts smile.gif
+0 February 15 2015 11:29:26 ShiMrSnuts
thanks for the listen, shi. Means something to me smile.gif
February 15 2015 09:44:43
MarceysMarceys Hey that's cool MrSnuts! Deep lyrics there. The best love songs are born out of emotion! Became a great track and tnx for the ride! smile.gif
+0 February 15 2015 11:28:03 MarceysMrSnuts
thanks marc! took quite some time to figure out the structure & match the message... never wrote a song in a similar way, moving from part to part. The "i dont know / cold wind blows" part was my initial idea, so I went backwards from there.
i owe you for that piano... thanks a lot, it wouldn't have happened without you smile.gif
February 15 2015 16:29:47 MarceysMarceys
And a open end in the song! Cool dubbele vocals at the end!
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