DISILLUDERTI NO DRUM HQ mp3 ATTACHED

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For Drummer and bass player: Download the HQ FILE ATTACHED WITHOUT DRUM AND BASS! ... Here you can see the tabs of the song: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1lUq5UhN3RwQW5tT7S8aD425jWfXefDPq/view?usp=sharing Do what you want! Raw song only with basic keyboards! ... POP - ELECTRONIC - ROCK - :) ...
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DrStrgeglv
Here- I made an American English interpretation for this song which feels like it should hold the spirit well...

This Delusion

Today I'm feeling down
Because maybe there is nothing left here
The love is lost over time.
I try to make myself more brave
I say that it's fine ....
Life carries on without you!

RIT:
Verse 2:
I'm writing, "I love you" and I do love you!
The strong, loud cry with a primal scream!
I cannot think now of how much I miss you!
And I'm suffocating to save you from delusion
It's only to avoid
Giving you more trouble
That I stay away from you
What are you doing now?
You shouldn't write, "I love you"
Because you don't really mean it anymore
Or perhaps you may want to write
That you don't want what's left of this?
I keep hiding
Do not write anymore
I miss you, I want you, but I will never grovel
Tell me again the same things
But I wish that at least .... Oh, Yes !!!
We could love like we did that Thursday!

Chorus 2:

Be strong- cry loudly to yourself when there is no more love
The love you felt shine deeply within you
It's best to step away so not to suffer anymore
But I'm suffocating to save myself from this delusion
Don't be delusional ....

Chorus 3:

Be strong- cry loudly to yourself
When there is no more love
The love you felt shine so deep within you
It's best to step away so not to suffer anymore
I hope this story will begin to glow again ...
Come back to shine once more ...
But it will never, never return ...
You know it too-
As well as I do!
+1
November 27 2017 14:48:33
DrStrgeglv
ettore Great ideal,Dr! Can you try to sing this Song? I can upload an instrumental version.... I am writing to you later .... +1
November 27 2017 21:35:53
DrStrgeglv
DrStrgeglv I would love to give it a try- Of course it's hard to predict whether it will mix well. Perhaps I can record a dry (no effects) solo track and allow you to mix-? +1
November 27 2017 21:42:29
DrStrgeglv
DrStrgeglv Also- if you're not fluent in English, translate my words back to Italian to ensure it's still consistent with your song's intended meanings- I made changes to flow more naturally in English with some "liberties" (LOL) +1
November 28 2017 01:10:10
DrStrgeglv
ettore Unfortunately I'm not fluent in English :) and if you can record a dry (no effects) solo track, this would be perfect, of course!!

I have already read the text in English and it is so beautiful too!
At some moments the story and the meanings are a bit different and have a different meaning eheheheh, but that's fine, don't worry :)

I'm happy to hear the song in English sung by you, with your "liberty" ;)

Do you need the instrumental version or can you sing it without it?

Many thanks in advance!!!
+1
November 28 2017 05:59:10
DrStrgeglv
DrStrgeglv I think it would be Ideal for you to post the instrumental version as a new template- Then If I make the recording, I can include the solo track as this forum is designed to promote. It will also increase interest for other players to participate.
I like your backing vocals on this- the emotional turmoil comes through without translation- this is the most important aspect of music- the cause of emotional transmission.
Since I speak Spanish I can understand much of it, but whenever I write and record a new song, my method is to become a fictional character who wants something or feels strongly for situational relief.
In this case YOU are the character, so it's important to understand accurately how to convey your goals in translation.
+1
November 28 2017 06:07:08
DrStrgeglv
DrStrgeglv It may be interesting to keep your vocals in Italian as the backing track?
Wonder if I can make that work.... Hmmm
+1
November 28 2017 23:27:46
DrStrgeglv
ettore You are right, man, of course :) Later I'll upload the instrumental.

I add here the right translation of my lyrics:

Dont’t be Disillusioned (or even better "To not disillusion you")

Verse 1
Today I'm feeling down
because maybe there is nothing left here!
The love is lost over time.
I try to make myself more brave.
And I say that it's fine ....
… Life carries on without you!

Chorus 1:
I'm writing you, "I love you" instead I do love you!
The strong, loud cry with a primal scream!
I cannot think now of how much I miss you!
And I'm suffocating to save you from disillusion!

Verse 2:
It's only to avoid giving you more trouble
That I stay away from you
What are you doing now?
I’m not writing you "I love you"
because now you don't want it anymore
Or you may want it but you’re writing (asking me) the opposite ?!?
So (Anyway), I keep hiding myself
and I do not write to you further!
I miss you, I want you, but I will never ask you to tell me the same things (I do not expect you to tell me the same things, I do not pretend)
But I wish that at least … Oh Yes!!!
We could love as we did that Thursday!

Chorus 2:
Come on, cry loudly to yourself there is no more the love...
… the love you felt… you felt... and that shone within you!
You say It's better to step back so not to suffer anymore.
But I'm suffocating to save you from disillusion!
… from disillusion
… to not disillusion you!
Don’t be disillusioned!

Chorus 3:
Come on, cry loudly to yourself there is no more the love…
… the love you felt… you felt and shining within you!
You say "It's better to step back so not to suffer anymore and hopefully this story come back to shine once more"
come back to shine once more ...
But it will never return ...
You know it too - As well as I do!

Hope it helps to undersand the real meanings of my real story really experienced and suffered!
+1
November 28 2017 23:35:15
DrStrgeglv
ettore ... about to keep my vocals in Italian as the backing track?

Why not? eheheheeh, We have to experiment, surely!
+0
Toshinho
Great song . I love Italian .+2
November 25 2017 01:33:38
Toshinho
ettore Thanksssss Tos :) +0
Marceys
Warm vocals! It’s great! This track could be much greater with a real drummer and bassplayer!+2
November 15 2017 03:13:05
Marceys
ettore Hi there, Marceys, you're perfectly right, here the song needs a bass and a real drum, of course! Thanks for the compliments:) +0
Carpenter
great pop-ballad :)+1
November 15 2017 03:13:40
Carpenter
ettore Thanks so much, dear Carpenter, glad you like it! +1
Tu
Im a new fan 💕💕+1
November 11 2017 21:59:21
Tu
ettore What a pleasure and surprise, I'm honored :) you're too kind :) +1
Tofzegrit
Magnifico!+1
November 11 2017 19:40:44
Tofzegrit
ettore Ciaoooo Tof :) J'ai laissé de la place pour une guitare ;)

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1lUq5UhN3RwQW5tT7S8aD425jWfXefDPq/view?usp=sharing
+1
November 11 2017 19:47:51
Tofzegrit
Tofzegrit I like Lenny & Ernie version. I will try something on Monday.. wait and see. Merci +1
November 11 2017 22:02:45
Tofzegrit
ettore .... perfect :) ... and don't forget the HD file, if possible. +0
frankiejazz
Grande! Mi ricorda il primo Vasco! ✨+1
November 11 2017 17:23:04
frankiejazz
ettore Ciao Franco.... è per questo che evito di cantare in italiano ehehehehe :) Ma so che è un gran complimento quello che mi hai fatto. +1
ivax
awesome Ettore :D:D increible amigo,me encantan las canciones Italianas,tienen tanta sensibilidad,tantas armonias y melodias tan bonitas,gracias por compartir <3+1
November 11 2017 17:13:18
ivax
ettore Ciao caro Ivax :) Fico realmente feliz por teres gostado disso e ainda mais por o teu comentario assim lindo. Obrigado pelas tuas belas palavras <3 +0
Ernie440
Really very cool and nice, great playing and singing man! :W:D+1
November 11 2017 17:11:04
Ernie440
ettore Thanks to you, dear Ernie :).... really a great bass... disillusions are importants, am I wrong?? Ahahaha, Have a nice day! +1
November 11 2017 17:12:02
Ernie440
Ernie440 We would never learn anything without them! :D Unfortunately .. hahaha +1
Lenny Cowler
really great track:)+1
November 11 2017 17:09:46
Lenny Cowler
ettore Thanks Lenny, very happy you liked it :) ... and thanks a lot for your super drumming ;) +0

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