Camel Ride Revisited - Now with B part

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Took OliVBee and Neronick's advice and added a key change and solo "B" part starting at 2:00. Key change repeats in the coda.

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Neronick
You are on the right way. Intro is still much too long, modulation a bit to late to my opinion. Needs at least ONE "real" instrument. Listen to Ennio Morricone to improve this song. You are talented.+0
January 09 2014 16:42:13
Neronick
geezer Ah yes...Ennio Morricone. His music in the Sergio Leone/Clint Eastwood westerns of the 60's is classic. As I was working on this track I was thinking it would probably fit as background music in some video...it's definitely got a "cinematic" (albeit clich├ęd) feel to it. Oh and the bass guitar is real...does that count? :) Thanks for the feedback! +1
gnoerreby
Nice!+0
Rickplayer
cool+0
akethesnaker
Sounds great!+0
jmrukkers
Really nice+0
MajorTom_III
great+0

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