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Remix step #2
Netherlands

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ericblom326 jams Supporter
Remix step #3 (playing)
Germany

Vocals:

AKchen353 jams Supporter
 
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Seifenblasen versperren mir die Sicht
ich glotze in das bunte Auge
es sieht mich nicht
hält sich verschlossen ..

ich halte die Luft an
der Weg führt nach unten
… nicht mal ein Seepferd,
auch nicht nach Stunden

dann wieder oben
betäubt Rosenduft mir die Sinne
und entdecke
nicht weit von hier eine seltsame Spinne

fass mir ein Herz
und steh endlich auf
der Nebel verzieht sich so langsam
auch



Ich sollte mal wieder baden,
während die Waschmaschine läuft!


© akchen 2015

Comments

February 12 2015 06:45:16
LieschingLiesching Schön :)
+1 February 12 2015 08:42:17 LieschingAKchen
danke ;)
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February 11 2015 16:16:09
jmrukkersjmrukkers Fab, splendid poetic delivery
+1 February 12 2015 08:41:48 jmrukkersAKchen
thank you ;)
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February 11 2015 14:35:30
josepssvjosepssv La burbuja obstruye mi visión
Me quedo en el ojo colorido
que no me ve
se mantiene cerrada ..

Aguanto la respiración
el camino es hacia abajo
... Ni siquiera un caballito de mar,
incluso después de una hora

a continuación, una copia de seguridad
aturdida fragancia al significado de Rose
y descubrir
no lejos de aquí una extraña araña

informarme corazón
y, finalmente, de pie sobre
la niebla se levanta lentamente
también
...
Debo de bañarme una vez más,
mientras que la lavadora está en marcha!


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February 11 2015 10:07:55
allgirlallgirl kool add, akchen

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February 11 2015 06:54:28
josepssvjosepssv Hehe, it's super fun Surrealism and Dadaism in these times.
+1 February 11 2015 07:26:09 josepssvAKchen
:) happy, you see the fun it the thing ... I do not care about nowadays dadaism, you´re informed better ... I don´t have a clue ;)
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February 11 2015 14:33:24 josepssvjosepssv
Not exactly. It is a personal appreciation.
Now with the intensive use of audiovisual language we can create a narrative from small pieces that once seemed disjointed.
Automatic writing of Tzara and Breton like but with pessimistic ideas.
Your text is more positive (and fun)
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February 10 2015 23:16:22
ivaxivax muy bueno akchen
+1 February 11 2015 07:28:37 ivaxAKchen
thank you :)
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February 10 2015 22:37:18
cody trippcody tripp very nice
+1 February 11 2015 07:28:47 cody trippAKchen
thanks :)
+1
February 10 2015 21:48:40
woXeywoXey wow what a trip... that was something.. :) very cool A :D
+1 February 11 2015 07:27:56 woXeyAKchen
:D thank you
+0
February 10 2015 19:33:01
pauluspaulus Super
+1 February 10 2015 19:35:46 paulusAKchen
danke :)
+1
February 10 2015 19:18:51
ericblomericblom Ich fühle mich sehr geehrt wegen Ihren Beitrag. Sehr schön, danke.
+1 February 10 2015 19:35:25 ericblomAKchen
du bist verrückt ;) ich veehre deinen add !! Danke :)
+1

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