I don't know (but I do feel)

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Netherlands
Keys:
Marceys906 jams
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step I
GOTO
Bahrain
Drums:
Baer205 jams
Sweden
Bass:
haddock195 jams
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step III
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Vocals:
MrSnuts84 jams
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+ 23
Shared:
02/14/2015
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I have been listening to the template track for a long time, and instead of going nuts, I figured it would be a nice way to spend valentines day to write this song. I'd appreciate comments on the lyrics, I'm aware of the limited singing skills (liked the last chorus, tho) ;) this one's for H.

Comments

FrankMil
Deep emotion+0
Bluesbudda
you are cool :-)+1
mandolodda
like very much, all thumbs I have for this+1
OliVBee
very nice band all together :) ... i like those lyrics and the way they're presented, the breathing is good and the flow very pleasant ! well done \o/+0
kimbo
Da mm..... I need to give more thumbs......great lyrics to a great tune....means so much more when real emotions are involved.
Goin on my playlist right now. well done all.... Specially you dick.
+0
AnneCozean
neat melody and phrasing.
"been down a long road" - lovely change
"to a song you'll most likely never hear" - well those words and that melody made my heart twinge. your lyrics could be sung in a totally mawkish self pitying manner, but they are absolutely not. vocal melody keeps it uplifted but not without questions. i think it's a beautiful marriage of magical music, profoundly personal and vulnerable lyrics, and a vocal delivery that makes it work. that last repeated verse really brings it to an effective close. glad i caught this one, Gentlemen. it's SOLID!
+2
February 15 2015 23:20:17
AnneCozean
MrSnuts thank you so much for your review, Anne! I'm a bit speechless tbh :) it's just right you mention the beauty of the music once more - these guys did a fantastic job +1
February 16 2015 01:54:48
AnneCozean
AnneCozean my pleasure, Sir Snuts. +0
Uloisius
Mir gefällts sehr gut ;o)+0
haddock
Hey, I like this a lot! :)+0
Shi
lovely backing track from Marceys, Baer and Mr H and very heartfelt lyrics and vocals from Mr Snuts :)+0
February 15 2015 11:29:26
Shi
MrSnuts thanks for the listen, shi. Means something to me :) +0
Marceys
Hey that's cool MrSnuts! Deep lyrics there. The best love songs are born out of emotion! Became a great track and tnx for the ride! :)+0
February 15 2015 11:28:03
Marceys
MrSnuts thanks marc! took quite some time to figure out the structure & match the message... never wrote a song in a similar way, moving from part to part. The "i dont know / cold wind blows" part was my initial idea, so I went backwards from there.
i owe you for that piano... thanks a lot, it wouldn't have happened without you :)
+1
February 15 2015 16:29:47
Marceys
Marceys And a open end in the song! Cool dubbele vocals at the end! +0
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