I can't say I've been the most subtle here, but I think energy and attitude are needed more than being 'right'. That's my excuse for probably overdoing it. Apart from checking the ending, I just jammed this fantastic template of Marc's. Basically four-on-the-floor throughout with the kick drum to keep it pushing and ...
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