A Song For Kay

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This is a really rough draft of a song I'm trying to work out for my daughter. A Little stumped on it so any ideas / suggestions / input would be really awesome :)

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July 10 2015 00:03:02
woXeywoXey this is perfect Dan! do not touch a thing.. great combo.. the 2 guitars are brilliant!
+1 July 10 2015 03:18:42 woXeyDanalyze45
Why thank you Wox....it is a total rough draft. I do like some parts of this but will probably make "some" changes here and there before all said and done :)
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July 09 2015 00:58:43
PsychoPsycho I like the beginning melody, and this could really stand out if you expand it. Otherwise it's very good.

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July 09 2015 00:09:48
RobMRobM Nice one Dan, but I have to agree with GaryA. First thought was to harmonise the 2 guitars more.

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July 08 2015 18:26:59
jmrukkersjmrukkers Nice one

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July 08 2015 16:46:57
RickplayerRickplayer So far sounds great I wouldn't change anything

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July 08 2015 14:20:38
TofzegritTofzegrit Dan dad's love

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July 08 2015 09:45:56
Buran70Buran70 Nice track

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July 08 2015 09:13:42
GaryAGaryA Sounds like a nice song. I feel the two guitar parts are fighting each other and being so different. Maybe harmonize them more. Let oine guitar establish the patterns for the song and then the other guitar can weave in, out and around harmonically. Just a thought. :-)

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