So Lonely And Bruised

Netherlands
Keys:
Marceys1077 jams
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England
Drums:
mpointon714 jams

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This template has been sat recorded on my Mac for two weeks. I've spent two weeks opening it, listening and then thinking, "nah, I'll do it again". Listened again tonight and decided a few timing tweaks were all that was needed. I'm still not happy with it - it just sounds a bit laboured to me.

As always with Marc, he gives you a musical Zen Rock Garden and dares you to come up with something! Always a challenge and always ...

Comments

Marceys
Yeah! Great approach Martin! I really like your mysterious intro! The groove in the second part gives the steadyness that was needed! Think it's ready for the bass! :) great job again!+2
September 12 2015 21:30:03
Marceys
mpointon Thanks, Marc. This was a tough one to give time for others whilst also not battering the tune. Your new template is next! It's equally open!!! :) +1
September 12 2015 21:35:23
Marceys
Marceys That's great Martin! Choose the one you think is best... Did a vocal over it today... Suit yourself:) +0
Midoru
Really good drum fit to this nice ambient song with great build in dynamics.+1
AKchen
super wonderful fit, love it :)+1
titi
Pleasure this evening to be your four thousandth fan !+1
September 12 2015 23:03:06
titi
mpointon Thank you, titi! :) :) :) +1
R1772
Great atmospheric tune. A bit jazzy, a bit ambient.+1
onewholeft
A great build up to a masterful climax good job 10 thumbs each+1
September 13 2015 04:46:18
onewholeft
mpointon Thank you, Lairdy! +0
aleonz
you have to see my face when I hear this track Martin, listening to the 2 of you in this track it's like I was pay attention for some Einstein theory on the chalk board, my eyes might looks so empty but you guys really smokin my brain while absorbing this track by 2 musical genius+1
frankyguitar
Wow, you did so well in this jam! Love it!+0
kennyadry
Wonderful drumming here again martin! You've totally capture i think what on marcey's mind and at the same time incorporating ur own style+0
PJE
Smoothly expressive never too much and always just so right enough - I particularly like how you give it the solid feel and sound with out once taking anything away from the keys - some bass/adds would be nice but you know what..... not essential as its that musically full and good from you and Marc - Great timekeeping, totally tight and fine drumming Martin my friend :)+0
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