Does The Phenix Know his Fate ?

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Caroljoyce14 jams Supporter
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Inspired by this text.
May i ask for drums, and if the cello of Claudia would ever appear to do the ligato ...or the "tiny harp" of Titi...

Have a good jam my new friends.

Rising phoenix /Colleen Houck


Does Rising Phoenix know his fate?
He’s born, grows strong, and learns to fly.
He builds a nest and seeks a mate,
He sleeps and thirsts and hunts the sky.


Does he know his future blazes?
A quelling flame will take his life?
When purging heat the pyre raises,
Consuming all his earthly strife?


Does stinging dread seep through his breast?
Does he regret past choices made?
Does heartbreak stir his feather’d crest?
Does he perceive the price he’s paid?


Exquisite once, his body burns
As he cries out in pain and fear.
Charred and black his feathers turn,
Conceding life, he sheds a tear.


From death so dire, another soul
Emerges new to take his place.
With destiny and purpose whole
A glorious dawn begins apace!


Does Rising Phoenix thank his sire
For embers black

Comments

December 06 2016 22:33:31
davidaustindavidaustin this gives a good feeling:) very cool music.

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September 24 2016 15:05:48
aleonzaleonz When I listen Chris remix, I had t stopped to climb up the tree, and listened the original version, floating with this beautiful track singin every words from that wonderful poetry its gave a great sensation Carol! what a lovely art!
+1 September 26 2016 13:46:47 aleonzCaroljoyce
Oh, interesting experiment: you really sang the written words ? I'm glad to read this. Have a good day Ali !
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September 20 2016 05:25:45
Lenny CowlerLenny Cowler awesome:)

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September 20 2016 04:55:35
WHITEPONGOWHITEPONGO Fantastic clarity and feel..I like this :)

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September 10 2016 02:44:52
piperpiper Beautiful piece Carol :D

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September 06 2016 23:23:11
StefStef Poetry in music or music in poetry ... fabulous! :)
+0 September 07 2016 11:04:17 StefCaroljoyce
Oh, nice to meet you Stef, and thank you this true touching compliment.Thanks to your words, I know now that this musical piece has reached its goal.
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September 06 2016 12:14:29
frankyguitarfrankyguitar That's very good Alice! Beautiful music, fine tune with a very nice and soft melancholy. And you have done a pretty work with your DAW! Sounds clear and very nice. Well done Madame!! :)
+0 September 06 2016 12:30:21 frankyguitarCaroljoyce
Thank you very verrrrry much Monsieur Franky !
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September 06 2016 13:03:09 frankyguitarfrankyguitar
Ever welcome :)
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September 02 2016 00:57:35
PsychoPsycho Very pretty work Carol... enjoyed very much !!
+1 September 07 2016 10:42:23 PsychoCaroljoyce
Thanx very much for your support Psycho !
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September 01 2016 17:49:34
pniveiropniveiro Very nice job !!
+1 September 02 2016 11:12:09 pniveiroCaroljoyce
thank you, pleased to have enjoyed your little ears... ;-)
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September 01 2016 17:02:12
GemmyFGemmyF Clear Recording!!! what did you do to accomplish? Pretty Playing!
+0 September 02 2016 11:10:47 GemmyFCaroljoyce
Thanks to Audacity. Select the noise profile. Then, reduice noise all track long. Then, normalize the track for a better volume... To be honest, this is a DIY made in Caroljoyce from a recording with my rotten phone...;-)
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September 02 2016 14:34:33 GemmyFGemmyF
very good!
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