Temporary glitch

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Marceys
Netherlands
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Marceys 1,608 jams
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tonyx62
Italy
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BB6
England
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Heard Marceys and tonyx62's track, was inspired, and the first lyrics immediately came into my head. Hope you like it.
Shi
liking the lyrics here BB and a cool song you made :) +1
BB6
BB6 Thank Shi, please feel free to sing your beautiful vocals to replace mine. +0
tonyx62
Nice song
Welcome here +1
BB6
BB6 Thanks, Tony, Glad you liked the song. As with all my songs, they are a demo that I hope someone else will turn into something much nicer. +1
Marceys
Cool lyrics, although they aren't very positive :)

It's just temporary! :) +1
BB6
BB6 Thanks Marceys. The tone of the tune felt like relentless daily struggle to me.

One thing: near the end (the bridge?) where it goes up, then down, then up, then down -- I think it would be more positive to do it, down up down up, so it finishes on a positive note. That's just to suit my song of course. :) +0
Baerenkind
Super gooood 👍👍 +1
BB6
BB6 Thanks! +1