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Using a new editor for the first time and the pace was challenging for the words from a poem I wrote several years ago. I tried :)
onewholeft
Mate this is a great song ! And yes I think you can do it better it sounds to like your not letting go on it feel it in your gut and let it out mate don't hold back ! Maybe drop the key one and shout it out a bit more this song could really rock ! Good job but I want to hear put it out there a bit more ! +1
Davnel99
Davnel99 well this is what happens when u try to do it in 1 take. like I said just need to work on the timing, then it will flow much better :) +0
SlonMusic
Nice song, Davnel99! +1
Davnel99
Davnel99 well thanks, but the nice part right now is your guitar work and Marc's keys. have to rework this with the timing - 1 take ain;t gonna cut it :) +0
aleonz
You wrote a very great lyrics Davnel, and you delivered in such a cool way, with a great emotion! +1
Davnel99
Davnel99 Thanks Alice - timing is out of wack for this fast paced rocker. 1 try ain't gonna cut it here on this super palette :) +0
Marceys
Way cool Davnel! Cool lyrics and I like your voice very much..... There are parts that have some small timing issues indeed. But that can be improved in another take! :) +1
Davnel99
Davnel99 yes I think so Marc thanks. can u and the boys drop by and we can rehearse this tune a few more times :) +1
Marceys
Marceys That would be cool indeed! I'm off to the meeting in Urft in 2 weeks! +1
Davnel99
Davnel99 yes I would love to attend, but a side trip to Germany isn't in my budget - maybe next year +1
frankyguitar
Great song Dave! All the other things are nice to have!! :) +1
Davnel99
Davnel99 Thank U Franky. I'm gonna make u my publicist, with your always positive flow :) +1
frankyguitar
frankyguitar Get I a working contract? Have to ask my boss, LOL ! My stuff is not perfect and it is how it is. But I love to express myself with the music, I'm only a little guitar disciple but also it's true better is better, you know what I mean? First music comes from the heart, the second is technique with the fabulous sound and so....but I'm not a prof ! I like your voice and your singing. :) +0
ivax
Good song Davnel, glad to hear from you again +1
Davnel99
Davnel99 Thank U Ivax, and it is good to be back, now I gotta work smarter to turn this perfect rock palette into what it should sound like :) +0
kennyadry
Very nice song here Davnel. And the quality of voice is so full! Typical of some classic rock blues singer which i really love +1
Davnel99
Davnel99 Thx Kenny - the timing was shaking trying to force lyric already written into this rhythm, but it got better in next take :) +0
Davnel99
After listening - gonna have to do a redo and work on the timing :( +0