First Upload, again.

gutoiannotti
Brasil
Guitar:
gutoiannotti 30 jams
Remix step II
Schifftacu
United States
Bass:
Schifftacu 3 jams
no additional instruments available so far
post your remix!
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Nov 2, 2015
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Hey thanks to those of you that still listen to the first track I uploaded, even though it was a solo bass. A terrible, terrible solo bass. I decided to revisit the tune and come up with some more structure. Tell me what you think, BE CRITICAL!!!
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Harley Benton TE-52 NA Vintage Series
Harley Benton TE-52 NA Vintage Series
Electric Guitar
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Marceys
critical?
You have a very good groove and choose some very fine tones! It's an awesome bassline!
If you want me to be very critical, I would have taken some more balance in the number of notes you are using here... it's almost a solo throughout the track. My personal favorourite is a very tight groove with some freaking of the bass at some points!
But hey... you wanted us te be critical!
great job and I hope to hear more of you at the Loops! A warm welcome!
+1
frankyguitar
Very nice, can not find..... :) +0
jmrukkers
Cool. good tone as well. +0
OliVBee
nice bass ! if you want my critical ear then here it is : your line is fine and well played though for an optimal groovy effect i'd let it breath a touch more ;) +0
November 2, 2015 at 3:33 PM
Schifftacu
Schifftacu Breathing, eh? Not the first time i've heard that. Ya know, I played sax and Tuba in schoool for 10 years and I always found it interesting that the director would have all the percussionists breath with the group. I know that's not exactly what you meant, but I still find it interesting. To your point - the spots we don't place is just as important as the stops we do play. Thanks for the feedback, hopefully I work on it! +1
KellsBells
Absolutely fantastic groove! :) Well done! Nice tone, a late welcome to the Loops from me. :) +0
Tofzegrit
Hop hop hop ! +0
Rickplayer
Well played Bass line +0
Stef
From what I hear here there is a remarkable bass player! Great job and welcome! :) +0
TomasFoe
hehe... genuine critical feedback...well played with right notes... well done! ..but, like OliV wrote, you could leave more oxygen to the track... and I would try another recording techniques - to bring presence to your sound and dynamic as well (less compression for example)... but these are the nuances, which you can learn here on wikiloops... so welcome onboard! :) ...and try to play your tuba too ;) +0
November 2, 2015 at 5:13 PM
Schifftacu
Schifftacu Music is 80% notes and rhythms, the other 20% are those nuances that make it an art form. I'm going to first try and write some better lines, then i'll learn about better recording/mixing techniques. Thank You bery much! +1
November 2, 2015 at 5:54 PM
TomasFoe
TomasFoe I am looking forward to it :).. and don t forget tuba! :D +1
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